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Tuesday 10 June 2014

mum and nan

My mum is like a teddy bear because she always bear hug
me it feel like smooth and warm. If you're dreadful she there
to help you to feel pleased in my home. She is kindhearted
from other people.



My Nan is care because She care to other people she always
making lunch from my brother and making dinner from family.
and kindhearted from me my brother and  family if you are sick

she makes you better    

4 comments:

  1. Hi john it's Harlem shake yo I never knew that you had a teddy bear well
    but when I was little I had a big as teddy bear and I was scared of clowns
    and when you see mine tell my what is you greatest fear well I out later.

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  3. I need 4 thing to be
    1.make sense
    2.Full stops and capital
    3.complex detailed sentences as well simple sentences
    4.Juicy words

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