gta 5

Bang! The gun goes off in my hand like a machinegun. I was going to kill fluff-09 nike-24 but they killed me first I going to get

my revenge.

In the holidays I was playing gta 5. I was playing the game by myself because it is my game and I was bored. In the game you have to kill all of them.

As I was about going to get my revenge on fluff-09 nike-24 they kept coming a kill me. So I went to go a get hot-43 because he has tank, bazooka and jet. I got his thing so I went to hop in the

tank.

I crushed them like an ant. It was awesome.

   

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